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最喜欢的电影

描述自己的喜欢的电影-不会组织语言🆚会组织语言

10 分钟

先尝试自己说

提问:What is your favorite movie?

假设你最喜欢的电影是 Shawshank Redemption 肖申克的救赎,尝试回答

(应该都看过吧,没看过赶紧去看)

本期跟读音频等待后台补充 MP3 链接后即可播放。
MP3

表达对比

脑海里的大概思路不会组织语言的表达:会组织语言的表达: (尽量没用复杂单词)
先直接回答问题,给出电影名字
My favorite movie is Shawshank Redemption.
The Shawshank Redemption is a movie I really like. /ˈʃɔˌʃænk rɪˈdempʃn/ (肖申克的救赎)
概述下电影讲述了什么故事
It's about a man called Andy who stayed in the prison for nearly twenty years and finally escaped from the prison. (描述电影剧情,用一般现在时)
It's about a banker called Andy who gets blamed for killing his wife. He ends up in Shawshank Prison for nearly twenty years. In all that time, Andy stays strong and smart. He never gives up hope and finds ways to make things better for himself and his buddies. In the end, he uses his smarts to break out of prison and starts living free and happy.
为什么喜欢,电影的独特之处或者让我印象深刻之处
I like the story because the it is very impressive. Even in such a terrible environment, he can still change it.
What I love about this movie is how it shows how powerful hope and friendship can be. Even in a bad place like prison, Andy finds little joys and helps others see the bright side of life.
升华下电影角色和主题
The movie also tells about. Freedom is very important and valuable.
The movie also sends a great message about freedom and the human spirit. The characters are super well-developed(角色塑造得非常到位), and the way the story is told makes you feel like you're right there with them.
总结一下
The movie really teaches me a lot. Like to be brave and to be hopeful.
It's more than just a movie; it's a story that makes you think about life and what really matters.

表达/单词巩固

redemption 英/rɪˈdempʃn/ 美/rɪˈdempʃn/

n.赎回(股票等);救赎;拯救

end up 和 in the end

He ends up in Shawshank Prison for nearly twenty years. 这里ends up 翻译为结果,强调行为动作导致的结果

In the end, he uses his smarts to break out of prison. 这里 in the end 翻译为最终

❤️ 练freetalk几点建议

💡1、用结构化的思维尽量让自己多说一点 (这点其他期也有展开说)

比如这期内容,有2个结构化思维的过程:

(1)第一个是梳理回答思路的过程,可以快速思考:回答问题➡️讲述故事➡️为什么喜欢➡️ 升华角色和主题➡️ 总结

在描述时就不至于说两句就不知道说什么。

(2)第二个是描述电影讲述故事时,可以快速思考:

who(a banker called Andy )

what1️⃣一开始怎么样(be in Shawshank Prison)

why1️⃣(gets blamed for killing his wife)

when/how long(nearly twenty years)

what2️⃣后来怎么样/期间怎么样(find ways to make things better)

why2️⃣(stays strong and smart)

what3️⃣最后怎么样(break out of prison)

why3️⃣/how(uses his smarts,甚至可以描述他怎么用的什么智谋和手段)

在描述时就可以尽可能把事情讲清晰。

💡2、把阅读词汇转化为口语词汇

大部分人都有大量的阅读词汇,就是认识,背过,但口语里想不起来,或者不会用

相应的做法:

背单词的方法调整(这点后面展开说)

组织语言系列中,我尽量都选择了一些认识但可能不会用的单词,可以多积累

拿一本本子专门记录这类单词(因为每个人还是有差异的,最好记录自己的“准口语词汇”),练习时刻意去回忆本子上的词,基本上两三次就会用了

💡3、多练习表达想法/思想/观点/感受/方案 (这个系列前几期都是相关内容)

💡4、多练习如何描述一个事件/故事/事实/经历 (接下来会连续多出几期这类内容)