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描述家乡和童年

描述家乡和童年-不会组织语言🆚会组织语言

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对话中的连续提问,按照顺序回答以下问题

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从上到下分别是问题1、2、3,回答完了上一题,再点击下一个问题音频:

问题文本:

问1、Could you tell me about your hometown? What do you like most about it and why?

问2、Can you describe a specific place in your hometown that holds special memories for you?

问3、How do you think these experiences have shaped who you are today?

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表达对比

考官问题 (按顺序)不会组织语言的回答会组织语言的回答 (基本无四级以上的词汇)
Could you tell me about your hometown? What do you like most about it and why?
My hometown is in Jiangxi province in the middle of China. It's a small village.
My hometown is a small village in central China.
It's very quiet and even old. (old用的不对)
It's quite peaceful, even a bit primitive. primitive /ˈprɪmətɪv/adj.原始的;落后的; 或者可以用behind the times 落后的
But it's very beautiful and the people there are very nice.
But the views are amazing, and the people are really nice and friendly.
What I loved most was when I was a kid. I could run happily in the field with my friends. and we played interesting games together.
What I loved most was being able to run wild in the fields when I was a kid, catching butterflies, and playing tons of games with my friends.
Can you describe a specific place in your hometown that holds special memories for you?
I can remember many things about my hometown.
My childhood in the village left many lasting impressions on me.
To be honest, life there was pretty hard. We didn't have enough things like food.
To be honest, life there was pretty hard. I grew up with limited resources.
We couldn't buy vegetables, so grandparents always grew vegetables. And we hardly ate meat.
We ate vegetables that my grandparents grew themselves, and meat was a real treat.
I really like when Chinese New Year came, my grandparents would prepare to kill a pig and it's really hard so we have to call many neighborhoods to help and we eat together, it's very busy. (这段话很啰嗦;busy想表示忙碌的,热闹的,不如用lively)
The best part of the year was Chinese New Year, when my grandparents would kill a pig, and everyone in the neighborhood would get together, making it super lively.
How do you think these experiences have shaped who you are today?
I think all those experiences made me become an optimistic and brave girl.
I think all those experiences made me cheerful and strong. They helped me develop a resilient character.
Besides, it made me really love peaceful living. Even though I have already lived in a big city, I often miss my hometown so much.
They also gave me this deep love for the slow pace of village life, so much that even now, living in the city, I often miss the calm and beauty of the countryside.

表达/单词巩固

resilient /rɪˈzɪliənt/ adj.有弹性(或弹力)的;有适应力的;能复原的 原文中 They helped me develop a resilient character. 这里用resilient比用optimistic(乐观的)更好,因为不是经历了很大很多的磨难,而是一些辛苦,培养了我的适应力

primitive /ˈprɪmətɪv/adj.原始的;落后的; resilient /rɪˈzɪliənt/ adj.有弹性(或弹力)的;有适应力的;能复原的;可迅速恢复的 多用现在分词、过去分词等短语,丰富句子表达,也避免冗余的多个句子平铺

文中绿色底色的部分,都是类似的用法

比如这句The best part of the year was Chinese New Year, when my grandparents would kill a pig, and everyone in the neighborhood would get together, making it super lively.

这里的making it super lively.是一个现在分词短语

就比再另起一个句子“It's very lively” 要更简洁更高级一些