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把握好20-30岁

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💬当你大概想表达的观点:

我们要把握好二十多岁的时光,因为这段时间我们做的事情,会产生很深刻长远的影响。

尤其是在爱情方面,我们应该有意识地选择我们想要过生活的人,而不是将就凑合。

我们的人生,从这个阶段开始真正有我们自己主宰。

🐶不会组织语言的人说的:

It's really important in our twenties.

We should make good use of this time.

Our decision can have a big influence on our future.

Especially for love, we should choose the right one carefully.

Our life actually starts from these years because we can really make our own decisions.

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【因为这篇TED内容有点过于口语化,虽然信息很丰富,但跟我们常见的高分应试模板还是有很大的差异的,因此我基于上面的简单表达稍微优化一些。不过肯定还是更建议大家学习TED原文的,那种松弛自然的表达是我们终极追求的】

The years of our twenties are extremely significant. This is a crucial period in our lives, and we must make the most of it. What we do and decide during our twenties can have a deep and lasting influence on our future.

Particularly in terms of love, we shouldn't just be with someone casually. Instead, we should be intentional and thoughtful when choosing the person we want to build a life with.

Our twenties are when we truly start to take control of our lives. It's the time when we become more independent and start making choices that are entirely our own. From this stage on, we are the ones shaping our own paths.

单词词组:

significant /sɪɡˈnɪfɪkənt/adj. 重要的;有意义的;显著的

crucial /ˈkruːʃl/adj. 至关重要的;关键性的

intentional /ɪnˈtenʃənl/adj. 故意的;有意的;有目的的

thoughtful /ˈθɔːtfl/adj. 深思熟虑的;体贴的;关切的

independent /ˌɪndɪˈpendənt/adj. 独立的;自主的;自立的

make the most of 充分利用

in terms of 就…… 而言;在…… 方面

take control of 控制;掌管

build a life with 和…… 一起生活;与…… 共建生活

from this stage on 从这个阶段开始

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表达对比

当你大概想表达的意思会组织语言的人说的 来源TED(略有增删整合)
我们要把握好二十多岁的时光,因为这段时间我们做的事情,会产生很深刻长远的影响。
Claiming your 20s is one of the simplest, yet most transformative, things you can do for work, for love, for your happiness, maybe even for the world. 把握好你的二十多岁,是你能为自己的事业、爱情、幸福,甚至可能为这个世界做的最简单却又最具变革性的事情之一。 transformative /ˌtrænsˈfɔːmətɪv/adj. 有改革能力的;起改造作用的;变革性的
尤其是在爱情方面,我们应该有意识地选择我们想要过生活的人,而不是将就凑合。
The best time to work on your marriage is before you have one, and that means being as intentional with love as you are with work. 在你结婚之前,就是改善你未来婚姻状况的最佳时机,这意味着你要像对待工作一样,用心经营爱情。 intentionally /ɪnˈtenʃənəli/adv. 故意地;有意地
Picking your family is about consciously choosing who and what you want rather than just making it work or killing time with whoever happens to be choosing you. 慎重选择与你组建家庭的人,意味着要有意识地去挑选你真正渴望相伴的人以及你向往的生活模式,而不是仅仅为了过日子而将就,或者随意地与那些偶然选择了你的人虚度光阴。 consciously /ˈkɒnʃəsli/adv. 有意识地;自觉地
Thirty is not the new 20, so claim your adulthood, get some identity capital, use your weak ties, pick your family. 三十岁不同于二十岁,青春已逝,所以要勇敢肩负起成年人的责任,积累一些能提升自身价值的资本,巧妙利用那些不太紧密的社交关系,慎重选择与你相伴的家人。 capital /ˈkæpɪtl/n. 资本;资金;财富 claim one's adulthood 承担起某人的成年责任 weak ties 弱关系(指不太紧密的社交关系)
我们的人生,从这个阶段开始真正有我们自己主宰。
Don't be defined by what you didn't know or didn't do. You're deciding your life right now. 不要让那些你未曾知晓的事物,或是你未曾完成的事情来定义你。你的人生走向,此刻正由你自己主宰。 defined /dɪˈfaɪnd/v. 下定义;明确;界定(define 的过去分词形式)
TED原视频完整版TED演讲:Why 30 is not the new 20
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